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I NEVER MEANT TO MAKE YOU CRY

Loretta Heard 

1stBooks 

2003

ISBN: 1-4107-5012-4 (e-book) 

ISBN: 1-4107-5343-3 (Paperback)

Contemporary Romance

I NEVER MEANT TO MAKE YOU CRY by Loretta Heard

Robin feels responsible for her family when her father dies, and she bottles her emotions in order to be strong for her mother and four siblings.  She works long hard hours at a factory job to help with their support.  Her relationships with three men (the father of her son, a married man, and her first husband) are unsatisfying and heartbreaking.  Then she meets O.J. 

O.J. falls in love with Robin, but he neglects to tell her some important things about his life.  O.J. has a twin brother, A.J., who also falls in love with Robin when he tries to help O.J. keep his secret.  The story line is loosely woven around lies, deception, and bendable morals. 

Although written in third person, I NEVER MEANT TO MAKE YOU CRY sometimes reads more like a memoir or diary than a novel.  The double spacing and lack of chapter divisions felt strange at first, but once I got into the story, the formatting no longer bothered me.  The book would have been improved by more careful attention to punctuation and pacing, but I related to the characters and identified with their problems. However, the cliff-hanger ending was disappointing and frustrating, making it necessary to read the touted sequel to find out what will happen to the characters. I felt cheated that there was no resolution to the story.

Reviewed by Marie DisBrow for The Road to Romance

March 11, 2004

 

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