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DIVINE INTERVENTION

Elisa Adams

Loose ID -- May 2005

Paranormal

Warning: Graphic sexual scenes

DIVINE INTERVENTION by Elisa Adams

Larissa and Drew’s once-perfect marriage is on the rocks. Drew is consumed by his work, spending all his waking hours in the office, and even Larissa’s most heart-felt pleas can’t change his muddled priorities. Devastated when Drew puts a damper on her plans for children--this, after forgetting yet another anniversary!--Larissa decides it’s over. Too late, Drew finally sees the light and hurries home.

But fate conspires against him. When Drew’s car crashes on a snowy road, he wakes up to find himself transported to a strange new world, and a strange new life–some kind of parallel, past reality in which he and Larissa never met. According to Shari, his new spirit guide/motivational counselor, Drew has been given a novel opportunity to restore the love he and Larissa shared at the beginning of their relationship. He must find Larissa and get her to love him again within a month–otherwise he’ll die.

The two leads are an odd match: Larissa is a plump, nervous girl who runs a bookshop and lacks self-confidence, while Drew is a dark and classically handsome man who knows--almost--all the right moves and lines to seduce her. In fact Drew’s challenge to woo Larissa in a month would likely have been more interesting if Larissa put up some resistance beyond worrying about her weight and wishing Drew wasn’t just so gosh-darn perfect. Of course, they are destined-to-be-together, but where’s the challenge--and excitement!--in romancing someone when most of the ground work has already been done for you?

Adams’ writing doesn’t exactly sizzle off the page–there are a few explicit sex scenes, but I didn’t find them terribly memorable. Perhaps the best and most original of them occurred when Larissa and Drew get in a quick--but cute--fumble in the cinema. As there’s nothing very risqué in this book, it’s more suited to readers who like their erotica pretty vanilla.

The supernatural aspects of the plot become increasingly annoying throughout the book; Shari, especially, is guilty of making vague comments about ‘supernatural’ matters that remain unresolved at the book’s end. Almost all questions about what is actually going on are brushed off with some variation of, ‘That’s too long to tell you now,’ or ‘No, it’ll be too hard to explain.’ Although despite this, the book’s big twist is still painfully predictable.

Minor complaints aside, this is an easy, quick book to read–and if you’re willing to forgive the occasional frustrations of the plot, you may enjoy this novella.

Reviewed by R. J. Astruc, The Road to Romance

June 6, 2006