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David Argeld has a secret. For the past year, he and an online pal have been sending emails to each other. But recently, BandiniSweet's emails have been more explicit, more alluring. Her hot messages about a dominant lover have him imagining the different ways to control a lover. But the face of the woman he imagines controlling is Jeannie Lin, the one woman in his office who seems immune to him. When he finally responds to BandiniSweet's email with a fantasy of his own, he can hardly believe it when it becomes reality.
Jeannie Lin also has a secret. She's been attracted to David ever since she began working with him, but his reputation with women scared her off. Her shy personality made it nearly impossible for her to express her desire for him, but now that she's discovered his fantasy, she knows she must risk everything and put herself on the line to give it to him.
I completely enjoyed this intense story. Although short, Legal Edentity provides a thorough glimpse of two individuals and their fantasies. David and Jeannie both want the other, but don't know how to express their needs. The anonymity of the internet provides them both with a safe, yet unsatisfying way to live out their fantasies. I loved that it was Jeannie, the beautiful, shy introvert who took the risk and approached David. I also liked his
"punishment" for Jeannie when he believes that she's been hacking into his emails. These two fit together perfectly and you'll enjoy watching them discover that.
Reviewed by Trang Black
for The Road to Romance
December 14, 2005
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