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Toni’s
life has sadly become all work and no play. Running the local bar, the
Cock’s Crow, leaves her little time for a social life. Her sex life is
virtually non-existent, and Toni has the itch bad for some hot
mind-blowing sex.
A
Halloween night off offers her just the chance she needs to find some
excitement, hopefully in the form of a hunky guy. Toni decides to attend
a Halloween bash at the infamous Mansion owned by Valamar Hattworth.
But, before she gets to meet the hunky Valamar, she is swept off her
feet by his roommate, the charming and alluring Altos. Their instant
attraction leads to a night of unbridled passion that goes from some
bondage play in the graveyard to frolicking in the bedroom. Altos is
determined to please Toni in more ways then one. Their party is just
beginning…
This
short story that promises to continue seemed very disjointed to me.
Although it is evident that Toni is seeking sexual gratification there
is just not enough of a plot to hold your interest. The story then
becomes a random chain of sexual activity that jumps from scene to
scene. I found the sexual language too technical to even hint at lust or
romance. The story was also much too short to develop the main
characters personalities and therefore, they lacked depth. Perhaps the
continuation of this story will delve deeper into the lives of both main
characters and what motivates them.
Reviewed by Katherine J. Turcotte for The Road to Romance
October 25, 2005 |
