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MIDNIGHT VELVET

Jaci Burton

Ellora’s Cave -- March 2005

ISBN:  1-4199-0110-9

Romantic Suspense

Publisher Rated: E-rotic

MIDNIGHT VELVET by Jaci Burton

Nevada James seems to spend her days wishing.  Wishing her job as an analyst for the National Crime Agency (NCA) would be more exciting.  Wishing she’d begin the agent-training program she’d been accepted into.  Wishing her love life was…living.  And wishing she could get her hands on Midnight, an agent whose calls send shivers of desire down her spine. Some might say that Nevada, whose NCA code name is Velvet, is in love with Midnight.  But Nevada refuses to acknowledge that.  To her, love is just a silly idea that would never happen. 

But when she receives a troubled coded call from Midnight that has the whole agency searching for his whereabouts, Nevada throws herself into harm’s way without even thinking about the consequences.  Before she knows it, she’s being trailed by drug dealers and is forced into living with Tyler Call, AKA: Midnight. 

Nevada’s daydreams of Midnight are immediately shattered when she learns that he’s an arrogant and unpleasant host, not at all the romantic knight she’d envisioned when on the other end of the telephone.  Still, she can’t help but feel intense attraction whenever he’s near.  Little does she know, he feels it, too.

Nevada’s and Tyler’s physical desires often get in their way of working together to solve the crime that’s got them hiding out.  What’s worse, when they learn that the very agency that they work for is behind the crime, they are forced into maddening isolation.  Things heat up, and they finally give in to the sexual desires that have them so distracted.  But will love now stand in their way?

While the plot of MIDNIGHT VELVET has promise of excitement that looms large in the beginning of the book, toward the end it just sort of peters out.  Burton writes sex scenes that smolder on the page, but merely skims over high-intensity moments that could otherwise be a high-climax resolution to the crime that the whole situation revolves around.

There are a few grammatical mistakes and belabored metaphors that, to a discerning reader, might be distracting.  However, Burton does redeem herself in the end with some clever and funny moments of self-talk with Nevada that rounds out her character, bringing her inner thoughts to the forefront.

The characters in MIDNIGHT VELVET are sexy and admirable with just the right amount of self-doubting to make them believable.  Readers will find themselves wishing for a little firearms training from the handsome and eager Midnight.  The overall strength of this novel is Burton’s use of sexual dialogue and unabashed love scenes.  She establishes boiling chemistry between Tyler and Nevada that jumps off the page, and gives a great romantic ending.

Reviewed by Jennifer Brown for Road to Romance

April 15, 2005