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THE HOUSE THAT JACK BUILT

Susan C.Yarina

Book 1 of Annie Hill and the Slinky Sleuths

Treble Heart Books

October 2003

ISBN 1-931742-51-0

Mystery, contemporary romantic fiction

THE HOUSE THAT JACK BUILT by Susan C. Yarina

 

THE HOUSE THAT JACK BUILT is a romantic mystery story set in contemporary years, yet, it slides back to the past in the 1800s and 1900s for further investigation. It is also a contemporary romance mixed with abundant fantasy and suspense and love.

Annie Hill, the heroine of the story, is a single young woman who adores her job as a private investigator and is reluctant to give it all up for the sake of marriage. Her colleague, Keela, is her best friend, while Annie's two kittens, Alfred and Agatha are the slinky sleuths that accompany her in the investigation of the mystery of her newly rent house.

Rick is the handy man Annie hires to fix the roof of her house. He is handsome and affectionate and does not look at all like Victor, Annie's ex fiancée, who hates cats. He is well off, always eager to help her around and shows an interest in Annie who tries to ignore him.

But will Annie be able to escape her previous love mistakes? Will Rick make her find true love? Or will she get back to Victor? And what is going to happen with her new spooky house? Is she going to abandon it ?

The house Annie rents hides a terrible secret. She finds out there is something weird about the house the first night she stays in. The mirror shows ghosts from the past . There is a non stop dance and a sad female figure that motivates Annie to solve the mystery. Rick and Keela are willing to help too. Rick's family is also involved, and now Annie is so much interested that she has to go on till the very end. Some of the locals are taking part too, adding more suspense and color to the plot.

THE HOUSE THAT JACK BUILT is a unique novel that can hold the reader's interest intact till the very end of the book. Moreover, the story is enhanced by several sketches of cats. It is an odd combination of text and sketches and I must admit that I liked it. Also I was happily surprised when I found out two recipes of dishes mentioned in the plot, at the end of the book. That was an unexpected ending I may say, that adds to the overall effect of the story.

However, there are some minor points that I have to mention. The dialect used by Keela, Annie's partner, would not make the book an easy read for everybody worldwide. That is to say, if the book is intended to be read by readers anywhere in the world, they might have a problem with the language. Also, the first chapter of the book did not make me look forward to reading the next one. I think that a stronger beginning should be added as the rest of the story is very interesting. Other than those, I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The characters are monogamous and there are not many points of view. The scenes are well constructed and the plot quite unexpected, thus making it an exciting read.

It is definitely worth reading it as I was kept wondering about the possible solutions of the mystery to the very end. This book is an exciting read, filled with suspense, love and romance. I particularly liked the fantasy elements of the plot, that is to say, the ghosts in the mirror and the rest of the spooky elements. The story was quite entertaining and looked historically accurate in the time travel the author describes, and although at the very end of the story, the plot turned out to be too unrealistic, the satisfactory ending compensated my expectations for the previous scene.

If you are cat lovers you won't want to miss this novel. You will love the sketches and the contribution of the cat roles to the plot. If you are not, you can't miss it either! It is an exciting mystery that needs to be solved. Get it today from http://www.trebleheartbooks.com , $12.95 paperback

Reviewed by Liana Metal for The Road to Romance

December 6, 2003

 

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